Showing posts with label as early as. Show all posts
Showing posts with label as early as. Show all posts

Thursday, 25 August 2011

considered as - considered to be


Look, up in the sky! Is it a bird? Is it a ‘plane? No, it’s... The Bad Article! Welcome back everybody, the time has come for us to take to the polished floor of the linguistic dancehall in our waxed grammar skating shoes once again.

First of all I’d like to say a big thank you to everyone who has ‘Liked’ us on Facebook or otherwise said hello over the last few weeks. Interest in the Article seems to have actually gone up whilst I’ve been away, something I wouldn’t have imagined possible. At any rate, it might have given most of you a chance to catch up on some previous posts and prepare yourselves for the onslaught of dangerous, dodgy, dotty articles ahead of us.

So speaking of which, and without much further ado about nothing, let’s get started. I present to you today, ladies and gentlemen, a strange case to consider. Let’s consult Mr. POD:

consider  (v)
1. Contemplate mentally, esp. in order to reach a conclusion.
2. Examine the merits of.
3. Formed after careful thought (a considered opinion).
4. (followed by (1) that or (2) to be) (1) have the opinion that, (2) be regarded as.
5. (in phrases) ‘All things considered, the day went pretty well.’ (meaning here ‘taking everything into account’).
 

Now then, what’s the problem? As far as our Polish>English translations are concerned, and in terms of good usage generally, we’re looking at number 4 above, which indicates opinion. In such expressions, we often see considered as instead of the correct considered that or considered to be. Like so:

blee!
1a. Nowy Targ is often considered as the jewel in the Tatran crown.
2a. Reich is often considered as the father of modern classical music.
3a. Many of these were considered as detrimental to the overall goals of the Union.
4a. After many months of debate, the Ukraine was considered as ideal.
5a. We didn’t try the salad, because their water is considered as less than sanitary.


 yay!
1b. Nowy Targ is often considered to be the jewel in the Tatran crown.
2b. Reich is often considered to be the father of modern classical music.
3b. Many of these were considered to be detrimental to the overall goals of the Union.
4b. After many months of debate, it was considered that the Ukraine would be ideal.
5b. We didn’t try the salad, because it is considered that their water is less than sanitary.

I should point out here that examples 1 – 3 are by far the more common; I mean specifically that the structure of ‘X is considered as Y’ is most common. Anyway, the fixes. Note how in 1 – 3 we need simply replace as with to be. A nice, simple, fix. If you’ve got yourself into a 4 or 5, then a tiny bit of rephrasing is required. This is because in 4b and 5b, apart form the tense change, we’re technically using passive voice, as opposed to the active voice of 1b – 3b.

I would urge you not to think about all that too much anyway (I try not to), and although there are some tiny tiny exceptions where considered as is kosher (legal, of course), just remember considered to be instead of considered as, and that’ll be 99% of the danger averted. Hurrah!

One last thing before you escape. There does exist a lot of passion about use of passive voice; some people would rather abolish it forever, and some say live and let live. Even thinking about the subject of active and passive voice gives me a gigantic migraine, and anyway I’m pretty sure it’s one of those things no real English native speakers understand anyway. Or maybe we just invented it to confuse foreigners, which was a totally stupid idea because only they understand it. So there you go, proof positive that the only factor influencing your skill, intelligence and aptitude is yourself. Bravo you! If you’ll excuse me, I’m going back to making my own dowód osobista with coloured paper and big crayons...

Many thanks to Professor Dotty for explaining the difficult bits to me. Doh!

Wednesday, 1 June 2011

already


Today, I’d like to introduce you to a close personal friend of mine, Already. I’ve known him already for nearly forty years, ever since we met in school, and already by the 1990s we already knew each other well enough to be already like brothers already.

 Enough already? Great, let’s begin! The problem with our friend already is three-fold: 

 1) He’s being put in the wrong place – after the verb, which makes the verb feel silly and look awkward in front of the other words (2a,4a,5a,6a),
2) He’s being shoved out on stage when really, he isn’t even in the scene at all (1a,3a),
3) He’s being used with existing to make already existing, which is pointless repetition (think ‘terminal death’, ‘sad funeral’, or maybe ‘true love’) (7a,8a).

 Already with the examples!
1a. Already in the 1980s, attempts were made to reduce the current immediately prior to breaking the metallic short-circuit...
1b. As early as the 1980s, attempts were made to reduce the current immediately prior to breaking the metallic short-circuit...
2a. Situated far from other buildings, it had started to deteriorate already during the interwar period.
2b. Situated far from other buildings, it had already started to deteriorate during the interwar period.
3a. You also recommended me to introduce changes already in the first act, before the main plot had even been introduced.
3b. You also recommended me to introduce changes as soon as in the first act, before the main plot had even been introduced.
4a. Regulation of monument protection rules was happening already in the first period after Poland regained its independence.
4b. Regulation of monument protection rules was already happening in the first period after Poland regained its independence.

5a. The new edition of the book is making its way to Kraków book shops already!
5b. The new edition of the book is already making its way to Kraków book shops!
6a. Levi’s® has started preparing already for their summer sales!
6b. Levi’s® has already started preparing for their summer sales!
7a. Already existing material is sometimes recycled for the new blog.
7b. Existing material is sometimes recycled for the new blog.
8a. Renovation works were carried out on the already existing infrastructure in the summer of 2007.
8b. Renovation works were carried out on the existing infrastructure in the summer of 2007.

 Fixes
For these three ghastly problems, there are three beautiful, lovely fixes, easily remembered and gratifyingly employed:
1) Put it somewhere else – before the main verb
(2b,4b,5b,6b),
2) Use something else – as early as, as soon as are good (1b, 3b),
  3) Don’t use it at all! (7b, 8b).

 So, any questions or comments, post them on our FaceBook page, or leave them in the box below already. ;)